This week in Big Writing we have been writing a descriptive account of a hurricane. Jamie wrote a fantastic piece. Here it is:
The weather forecast thinks that there is going to be a storm
coming! People started barricading their doors and windows with wooden planks. They were getting: food, drinks and supplies for the storm shelter. Soon they went to the storm shelter
with their children and pets.
Suddenly, out of the corner of one eye I saw and
heard…a furious storm, twisting tornadoes, hurrying hurricane, leering
lightning, houses collapsing, trees bending, waves splashing and wind
whistling.
Without warning, the storm came to the atmosphere and ripped
through the terrain like a lion ripping through its meat.
I was scared, petrified, nervous, worried and terrified (by the
looks of it everyone was too).
Finally, the storm went and I saw fallen trees, upside down
cars,
but at least the storm was over.
The weather forecast thinks that there is going to be a storm
coming! People started barricading their doors and windows with wooden planks. They were getting: food, drinks and supplies for the storm shelter. Soon they went to the storm shelter
with their children and pets.
Suddenly, out of the corner of one eye I saw and
heard…a furious storm, twisting tornadoes, hurrying hurricane, leering
lightning, houses collapsing, trees bending, waves splashing and wind
whistling.
Without warning, the storm came to the atmosphere and ripped
through the terrain like a lion ripping through its meat.
I was scared, petrified, nervous, worried and terrified (by the
looks of it everyone was too).
Finally, the storm went and I saw fallen trees, upside down
cars,
but at least the storm was over.
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