This week we are reworking a known story to make it our own. We will be thinking carefully about the vocabulary we choose. Can you think of any words we could use to replace said?
How else could I say it?
26/11/2013 08:54:38 pm
26/11/2013 08:55:58 pm
shouted, yelled, screamed, screeched and whispered.
26/11/2013 10:03:45 pm
Fantastic alternatives to 'said' Emily and Megan! These should be a big help to the class!
27/11/2013 12:24:12 am
Say Screamed Shouted Asked and Screeched
27/11/2013 12:40:16 am
Well done Ellie - a good range of said words!
Lucy (year 4)
27/11/2013 02:16:04 am
Demanded, answered, asked, mumbled, wailed, squealed, echoed and cryed.
27/11/2013 02:19:58 am
Well chosen words Lucy! I look forward to seeing them in your writing! Remember it's 'cried' not cryed.
27/11/2013 02:52:40 am
Say echoed, mumbled, screeched, yelled and lied.
27/11/2013 03:58:16 am
replied, ordered, offered, thought, agreed, argued, requested, boasted, exclaimed, called, corrected, counted, decided, discovered.
27/11/2013 04:14:04 am
Fantastic Georgia - good choices!
27/11/2013 04:16:32 am
A superb choice of words Keira - I will be very impressed if you use these in your work.
27/11/2013 04:20:24 am
I had lots of fun on this task.Thank you Mrs Davis
Lucy year 4
28/11/2013 12:44:37 am
29/11/2013 12:18:59 am
Yelled,shouted,screamed,asked, cried,wind, lied,echoed, moaned,ordered ,mumbled,argued,decided, screeched,whisped,
29/11/2013 12:47:53 am
Excellent Amberleigh! A great selection of useful vocabulary.
Logan (yr 6)
29/11/2013 01:43:06 am
declare, state, announce;
29/11/2013 06:49:55 am
Thank you Logan, your help will be greatly appreciated by year four!
3/12/2013 01:47:11 am
replied complain shout scream mumbled asked screeched whispered yelled ordered repeated boasted decided echoed corrected demanded declared announce explain cried
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